饼图是小作文中最容易上手的题型——但“简单”不等于“好写”。
饼图虽然数据量小,但要写好,需要比较、归类、找规律。
🎯 本章学习目标
🥧 饼图的基本特征
饼图长什么样?

📊 单饼图 vs 多饼图
单饼图
多饼图

📝 饼图四段式结构
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📖 Simon范文解析:三个饼图

📖 Simon范文解析:两个饼图

🎨 比例表达大全
描述占比
| 中文 | 英文表达 | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
| 占...比例 | accounted for | A accounted for 40%. |
| 构成 | made up | A made up the largest share. |
| 代表 | represented | A represented 25% of the total. |
| ...的比例是 | the proportion of...was | The proportion of A was 30%. |
描述大小
| 场景 | 表达 |
|---|---|
| 最大 | the largest proportion / the biggest share / the most significant |
| 最小 | the smallest proportion / a negligible share / the least significant |
| 第二大 | the second largest / followed by |
描述变化(多饼图)
| 场景 | 表达 |
|---|---|
| 上升 | rose to / increased to / climbed to |
| 下降 | fell to / decreased to / dropped to |
| 保持 | remained at / stayed at / stood at |
分数/百分比表达
| 数字 | 表达方式 |
|---|---|
| 25% | a quarter / one quarter / 25 percent |
| 33% | a third / one third / roughly a third |
| 50% | half / a half / 50 percent |
| 66% | two thirds / approximately two thirds |
| 75% | three quarters / 75 percent |
⚠️ 饼图常见错误
📝 实战练习
🔖 饼图高分表达速查
开头替换
| 原表达 | 替换选项 |
|---|---|
| The pie chart shows... | The pie chart compares/illustrates/presents... |
| the percentage of | the proportion of / the share of |
比例表达
| 场景 | 表达 |
|---|---|
| 占最大比例 | accounted for the largest proportion |
| 占最小比例 | made up the smallest share |
| 约占一半 | represented roughly half of the total |
| 仅占2% | stood at only 2% / a mere 2% |
比较表达
| 场景 | 表达 |
|---|---|
| A是B的两倍 | A was twice as high as B |
| A是B的三倍 | A was three times the figure for B |
| A远高于B | A was significantly higher than B |
| A略高于B | A was marginally higher than B |