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⚠️ 讨论类 vs 观点类:别搞混了!

很多同学容易把 Discuss Both Views 和 01 Agree or Disagree(观点类) 搞混。两者的核心区别在于视角不同


🎯 三种立场选择

在动笔之前,你需要决定自己的立场。讨论类作文允许以下三种表态方式:

无论选择哪种立场,有一点非常重要:两个主体段都要写得充实。不能因为你支持A,就把B写得很敷衍——考官要看的是你能否公正地呈现双方观点


📝 6.5分稳健模板

开头段 Introduction

People have different views about whether [改写题目]. 
In this essay, I will discuss both sides and explain why I [agree with one side / partly support both].

这个开头直接明了:

  1. 🎯 交代话题
  2. 📋 预告结构(会讨论双方)
  3. 💡 暗示自己的立场

主体段一:观点A

On the one hand, some people believe that [观点一]. 
This is because [解释]. 
For example, [例子]. 
As a result, [总结影响].

主体段二:观点B

On the other hand, others argue that [观点二]. 
In many cases, [解释]. 
For instance, [例子]. 
Therefore, [总结理由].
连接词作用
On the one hand... On the other hand...标准的双边对比结构
some people... others...引出不同群体的观点
This is because... / In many cases...解释原因
As a result / Therefore总结该观点的逻辑

结尾段 Conclusion

In conclusion, although both sides have their own merits, I believe that [重申你的立场]. 
It is important to [提出建议或预测结果].

🚀 7分进阶模板

开头段 Introduction

The issue of whether [改写题目] has sparked ongoing debate. 
While some individuals believe that [观点一简述], others argue that [观点二简述]. 
In my view, I tend to agree that [你的立场].

主体段一:观点A

On the one hand, many people support the idea that [观点一]. 
This belief is often based on [解释原因]. 
For instance, [具体例子或场景说明]. 
As a result, it is understandable why this side argues that [总结观点一的核心逻辑].

主体段二:观点B

On the other hand, others maintain that [观点二]. 
One major reason is that [解释]. 
A good example would be [例子]. 
From this perspective, [总结这方观点的合理性].
6.5分表达7分表达
others argue that...others maintain that...
For example...A good example would be...
Therefore...From this perspective...

结尾段 Conclusion

In conclusion, although both perspectives have their merits, I firmly believe that [重申你的观点]. 
Balancing both sides is essential, but [你的立场提供的优势/建议] makes it a more convincing approach in the long run.

✍️ 实战范文对照


📗 6.5分范文

📊 简评:结构完整,两边都讨论到了,结尾也有明确立场(支持optional)。但语言偏简单,缺乏对深层原因的挖掘。


📘 7分范文

📊 简评:语言更精炼,分析更深入。注意主体段二中的 "intrinsic motivation“(内在动机)和 ”checkbox task"(打勾式任务)这类表达,展现了对问题的深度理解。


⚠️ 讨论类写作的常见误区


🔗 相关学习资源

🔄 题型对比(必看!):

📊 其他题型:

🎓 综合练习:

📚 素材积累:

  • 九大话题万能观点库 - 各类话题的现成论据