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利弊分析类作文 Advantage & Disadvantage

雅思大作文论证武器库五大题型写作模板Advantage & Disadvantage利弊类评分标准题型模板观点类讨论类原因影响

🎯 两种写法，看清题目再动笔

根据题目的具体问法，利弊类作文有两种不同的处理方式：

📝 6.5分稳健模板

开头段 Introduction

In recent years, [改写题目中的现象] has sparked a heated debate. 
While there are some clear benefits of this trend, there are also several drawbacks that need to be considered.

这个开头做了三件事：

  1. 🕐 引出话题：用 "In recent years" 表明这是一个现代现象
  2. ✅ 承认优点："clear benefits"
  3. ⚠️ 预告缺点："drawbacks that need to be considered"

主体段一：优点 Advantages

One of the main advantages is that [优点1]. 
This is because [解释理由]. 
For example, [具体例子]. 
As a result, [总结影响或正面效果].

主体段二：缺点 Disadvantages

On the other hand, a major disadvantage is that [缺点1]. 
This often leads to [进一步解释]. 
For instance, [现实中的例子]. 
Therefore, [总结这一缺点的影响].

结尾段 Conclusion

In conclusion, although [现象] brings several advantages, the potential downsides cannot be ignored. 
It is important to weigh both sides carefully before drawing a final conclusion.

如果题目要求表态（outweigh类），可以改成：

In conclusion, although [现象] has some drawbacks, I believe the advantages clearly outweigh the disadvantages. 
The key is to [提出建议或平衡之道].

🚀 7分进阶模板

7分模板在语言和逻辑上都有所提升，强调分析的深度和表达的精准度。

开头段 Introduction

There has been growing interest in [改写题目中的现象], which has both positive and negative consequences. 
This essay will examine the main advantages and disadvantages before offering a reasoned conclusion.

主体段一：优点 Advantages

One significant benefit is that [优点1]. 
This enables individuals/society to [具体好处]. 
For instance, [具体例子]. 
Such outcomes contribute to [总结积极影响].

这个结构的精妙之处：

主体段二：缺点 Disadvantages

However, one drawback of this trend is that [缺点1]. 
It can result in [解释具体问题]. 
For example, [例子说明]. 
As a consequence, [总结不利影响].

结尾段 Conclusion

To conclude, [话题] has both promising benefits and considerable downsides. 
In my view, its impact depends largely on how it is implemented or managed. 
With proper regulation or awareness, the advantages can be maximized while minimizing the risks.

✍️ 实战范文对照

📗 6.5分范文

📊 简评：结构完整，逻辑清晰。但题目问的是 "outweigh"，结尾却没有明确表态优点是否大于缺点——这会影响 Task Response 的分数。

📘 7分范文

📊 简评：语言更精炼，分析更深入。注意缺点段最后一句 "not only... but also...“ 的用法——把经济影响和社会影响并列，展现了多维度思考。结尾也正面回应了”outweigh"的问题。

📝 常用词汇升级

写利弊分析时，以下词汇替换可以帮助你的语言更上一层楼：

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📚 素材积累：

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