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📋 题目


🎯 题型分析

项目内容
题型Discuss Both Views(讨论类)
话题教育类 - 课程设置
关键词academic subjects, practical/career, broader range, art/music
考察能力客观讨论两方观点并表达自己立场

🔍 审题要点


📝 高分范文


📊 结构拆解

【开头段】
├── 背景:debate has long divided
├── 让步:practical subjects valuable
└── 立场:well-rounded education essential

【主体段1 - 观点A】
├── 引出:Those who advocate for...
├── 论点:equip with applicable skills
├── 原因:competitive economy
└── 补充:limited time, economic returns

【主体段2 - 观点B】
├── 转折:However
├── 论点:broader purposes of education
├── 原因:creativity, exploration
└── 证据:studies show...

【主体段3 - 个人观点】
├── 过渡:The ideal approach
├── 立场:strike a balance
└── 方案:integrate skills within creative subjects

【结尾段】
├── 总结:prepare without sacrificing
└── 升华:well-rounded individuals

✨ 语言亮点

高分词汇

词汇/短语含义用法
career-oriented职业导向的career-oriented subjects
well-rounded全面发展的well-rounded education
employability就业能力enhance employability
vocational职业的vocational subjects
marginalise边缘化should not be marginalised
strike a balance取得平衡strike a balance between...
academic rigour学术严谨性academic rigour

高分句型


🔄 可迁移表达

原句可迁移到
"directly applicable to the job market"任何职业技能话题
"with limited classroom time"时间/资源有限的场景
"childhood is a unique period for exploration"儿童教育话题
"deprive them of discovering their true passions"限制选择的话题
"serves both immediate needs and long-term development"短期vs长期的讨论

💭 思考延伸


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