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📋 题目


🎯 题型分析

项目内容
题型Discuss Both Views(讨论类)
话题环境类 - 责任归属
关键词environmental protection, responsibility, governments, individuals
考察能力分析责任分配,展现辩证思维

🔍 审题要点


📝 高分范文


📊 结构拆解

【开头段】
├── 背景:environmental degradation is pressing
├── 引出争议:who bears responsibility
├── 立场:both essential, governments lead
└── 预告:complementary roles

【主体段1 - 政府责任】
├── 引出:Those who emphasise...point to
├── 论点:systemic nature of problems
├── 证据:industrial processes, infrastructure, market failures
├── 政府权力:regulate, set standards, invest, enforce, coordinate
└── 小结:without this, individual efforts insufficient

【主体段2 - 个人责任】
├── 转折:On the other hand
├── 论点:collective change begins with personal choices
├── 具体行为:reducing, recycling, using, supporting, eating
├── 升华:cultural change, social norms
└── 连接:regulations need public compliance

【主体段3 - 个人观点】
├── 立场:complementary rather than competing
├── 政府角色:create framework
├── 个人角色:operate within framework
├── 对比论证:neither can succeed alone
└── 总结:top-down + bottom-up in tandem

【结尾段】
├── 批评:false dichotomy
├── 方案:comprehensive approach
└── 升华:protecting it is everyone's job

✨ 语言亮点

高分词汇

词汇/短语含义用法示例
systemic系统性的systemic nature of environmental problems
market failures市场失灵result from market failures
scattered and insufficient分散且不足的individual efforts remain scattered
public compliance公众遵守regulations depend on public compliance
false dichotomy虚假二分法is a false dichotomy
top-down / bottom-up自上而下/自下而上top-down regulation and bottom-up change
working in tandem协同工作working in tandem
citizen buy-in公民支持/认同without citizen buy-in

高分句型


🔄 可迁移表达

这些表达可以用于其他责任归属类话题:

原句可迁移到
"systemic problems require systemic solutions"医疗、教育、贫困等社会问题
"only governments possess the power to..."任何需要政府干预的话题
"create market pressure that influences corporate behaviour"消费者权力、企业责任话题
"cultural change starts with individuals"社会变革、观念转变话题
"create the framework that makes X easier and more convenient"政府如何促进行为改变

💭 思考延伸


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