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📋 题目


🎯 题型分析

项目内容
题型Discuss Both Views(讨论类)
话题环境类/伦理类 - 动物权利
关键词animal testing, banned, cruel, medical progress
考察能力平衡伦理关怀与科学实用性

🔍 审题要点


📝 高分范文


📊 结构拆解

【开头段】
├── 背景:contentious issue in biomedical research
├── 让步:acknowledge suffering, support minimising
├── 立场:complete immediate ban would be premature
└── 预告:balanced approach needed

【主体段1 - 支持禁止】
├── 引出:Those who advocate...raise valid concerns
├── 伦理论点:sentient beings, cannot consent
├── 科学论点:species differences, not reliable
└── 后果:wasted lives, dangerous drugs

【主体段2 - 反对禁止】
├── 转折:However, proponents point to...
├── 证据:medical breakthroughs(具体列举)
├── 反驳替代方案:improving but cannot replicate complexity
└── 结论:necessary if regrettable

【主体段3 - 个人观点】
├── 立场:embrace the three Rs
├── 措施1:invest in alternatives
├── 措施2:restrict to essential research
├── 措施3:ensure highest welfare
├── 措施4:ban cosmetic testing
└── 总结:honour both obligations

【结尾段】
├── 承认:genuine ethical dilemma
├── 重申:strive to reduce but not blanket ban
└── 精彩结尾:make unnecessary vs pretend arrived

✨ 语言亮点

高分词汇

词汇/短语含义用法示例
contentious issue争议性问题one of the most contentious issues
sentient beings有感知能力的生物animals are sentient beings
premature为时过早的a complete ban would be premature
translate to转化为,适用于results do not translate to humans
organoids类器官cell cultures and organoids
the three Rs3R原则Replace, Reduce, and Refine
ethically defensible在伦理上站得住脚的the most ethically defensible path
blanket ban全面禁止a blanket ban would impede progress
necessary if regrettable必要但令人遗憾的remains a necessary if regrettable step

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🔄 可迁移表达

这些表达可以用于其他伦理争议话题:

原句可迁移到
"a genuine ethical dilemma with no easy answers"安乐死、堕胎、基因编辑等话题
"raise valid concerns that deserve serious consideration"任何需要尊重对方的讨论
"cannot yet fully replicate the complexity"技术替代传统方法的话题
"necessary if regrettable"承认负面但仍支持的情况
"honour both our obligations"平衡多方利益的话题

💭 思考延伸


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