Rita LogoRita英语学习工坊

📋 题目


🎯 题型分析

项目内容
题型Discuss Both Views(讨论类)
话题教育类 - 教学方式
关键词online learning, replace, traditional classroom, face-to-face
考察能力讨论技术对教育的影响

🔍 审题要点


📝 高分范文


📊 结构拆解

【开头段】
├── 背景:rapid expansion of technology
├── 引出争议:some predict...
└── 立场:cannot fully replace

【主体段1 - 在线学习优势】
├── 引出:Proponents point to...
├── 论点1:flexibility
├── 论点2:democratises education
└── 论点3:leverage technology

【主体段2 - 传统课堂优势】
├── 转折:Nevertheless
├── 论点1:human interaction
├── 论点2:discipline and motivation
└── 论点3:socialisation

【主体段3 - 个人观点】
├── 过渡:The most likely future
├── 立场:hybrid model
└── 具体:lectures online, discussion offline

【结尾段】
├── 总结:increasingly important but not replace
└── 升华:integration, not substitution

✨ 语言亮点

高分词汇

词汇/短语含义用法
render...obsolete使...过时render classrooms obsolete
unprecedented前所未有的unprecedented flexibility
democratise使民主化/普及化democratise education
leverage利用,发挥作用leverage technology
spontaneous即兴的,自发的spontaneous questions
self-regulation自我调节self-regulation required
hybrid model混合模式a hybrid model
wholesale substitution全面替代not wholesale substitution

高分句型


🔄 可迁移表达

原句可迁移到
"learn at their own pace"个性化学习话题
"accessible to those in remote areas"资源公平分配话题
"the self-regulation required for..."讨论自律能力的话题
"not merely about X but also about Y"任何需要扩展讨论的话题
"maximises efficiency while preserving..."效率vs其他价值的讨论

💭 思考延伸


🔗 相关内容