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📋 题目


🎯 题型分析

项目内容
题型Agree/Disagree(观点类)
话题社会类 - 传统与现代
关键词customs, traditional, no longer relevant, not worth keeping
考察能力评价传统在现代社会中的价值

🔍 审题要点


📝 高分范文


📊 结构拆解

【开头段】
├── 对方观点:relics of a bygone age
├── 让步:certain outdated practices deserve to fade
├── 立场:strongly disagree with sweeping claim
└── 预告:serve vital functions

【主体段1 - 让步:某些传统确实过时】
├── 问题1:superstition(folk remedies)
├── 问题2:discrimination(gender, caste, ethnicity)
├── 问题3:stifle innovation
└── 重新定义:discarding = progress, not loss

【主体段2 - 反驳:传统有深刻价值】
├── 价值1:identity and belonging
├── 价值2:community bonds
├── 价值3:transmit values across generations
├── 现代背景:atomised society needs anchors
└── 额外价值:traditional knowledge

【主体段3 - 个人观点:选择性保留】
├── 关键:evaluate critically
├── 保留标准:dignity, cohesion, enrich
├── 淘汰标准:harm, injustice
└── 核心表达:thoughtful evolution

【结尾段】
├── 批评:blanket assertion short-sighted and dangerous
├── 真正挑战:not choose between extremes
└── 解决方案:discern and adapt

✨ 语言亮点

高分词汇

词汇/短语含义用法示例
relics of a bygone age过去时代的遗物traditions have become relics
sweeping claim一刀切的说法disagree with the sweeping claim
perpetuate discrimination使歧视永久化traditions that perpetuate discrimination
stifle innovation扼杀创新rigid adherence can stifle innovation
atomised society原子化社会an increasingly atomised society
anchors of tradition传统的锚these anchors offer stability
thoughtful evolution深思熟虑的演变goal should be thoughtful evolution
blanket assertion笼统的断言the blanket assertion is dangerous

高分句型


🔄 可迁移表达

原句可迁移到
"relics of a bygone age“任何讨论”过时"事物的话题
"sweeping claim"批评极端观点时使用
"perpetuate discrimination"性别、种族、社会平等话题
"an increasingly atomised society"社交媒体、城市化、孤独话题
"thoughtful evolution that honours the past while embracing change"改革、现代化话题

💭 思考延伸


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