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📋 题目


🎯 题型分析

项目内容
题型Agree/Disagree(观点类)
话题政府类/健康类 - 广告监管与公共健康
关键词government, ban, advertisements, unhealthy food, children
考察能力评估政府干预市场和保护公共健康的边界

🔍 审题要点


📝 高分范文


📊 结构拆解

【开头段】
├── 背景:rising obesity rates
├── 让步:reservations about outright bans
├── 立场:significant restrictions justified
└── 重点:especially aimed at children

【主体段1 - 支持限制】
├── 论点1:advertising works(companies spend billions)
├── 论点2:children vulnerable(lack cognitive ability)
├── 后果:lifelong health problems, healthcare costs
└── 正当性:demonstrable public harm → regulation legitimate

【主体段2 - 反对禁止的担忧】
├── 担忧1:free speech, government overreach
├── 担忧2:parents' responsibility
├── 担忧3:defining "unhealthy" contentious
├── 担忧4:advertising moves to social media
└── 担忧5:limited effect without other measures

【主体段3 - 折中方案】
├── 立场:targeted restrictions, not absolute bans
├── 针对儿童:prohibit specifically aimed at children
├── 针对成人:health warnings, restrict misleading claims
└── 综合策略:education, labelling, economic factors

【结尾段】
├── 重申:stop short of complete ban
├── 支持:robust restrictions justified
└── 有力结尾:freedom should not extend to manipulating

✨ 语言亮点

高分词汇

词汇/短语含义用法示例
outright ban完全禁止reservations about outright bans
calorie-dense, nutrient-poor高热量低营养calorie-dense, nutrient-poor products
persuasive intent说服意图recognise advertising's persuasive intent
demonstrable public harm可证明的公共危害when advertising causes demonstrable harm
government overreach政府越权questions about government overreach
proportionate相称的,成比例的more proportionate than prohibition
comprehensive strategy综合策略part of a comprehensive strategy
stop short of不至于,差一点I stop short of endorsing

高分句型


🔄 可迁移表达

原句可迁移到
"particularly vulnerable" + "lack cognitive ability"儿童保护、老年人、消费者权益话题
"demonstrable public harm"任何需要证明监管正当性的话题
"targeted restrictions rather than absolute bans"任何需要折中方案的政策话题
"part of a comprehensive strategy"需要综合方案的话题
"freedom should not extend to manipulating"言论自由、商业自由边界话题

💭 思考延伸


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