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📋 题目


🎯 题型分析

项目内容
题型Advantages/Disadvantages(利弊分析类)
话题媒体类 - 社交媒体与青少年
关键词social media, young people, advantages, disadvantages
考察能力客观分析技术对特定群体的双面影响

🔍 审题要点


📝 高分范文


📊 结构拆解

【开头段】
├── 背景:integral part, several hours daily
├── 具体化:Instagram, TikTok, Snapchat
├── 平衡预告:opportunities and risks
└── 立场:disadvantages warrant careful attention

【主体段1 - 优点】
├── 社交功能
│   ├── maintain friendships across distances
│   ├── find communities of shared interests
│   └── access support networks
├── 学习功能:educational content, diverse perspectives
├── 表达功能:creativity, identity, civic participation
└── 总结:genuinely empowering

【主体段2 - 缺点】
├── 心理健康
│   ├── anxiety, depression, body image
│   └── social comparison, addictive design
├── 网络霸凌:beyond school walls into bedrooms
├── 隐私风险:data collection, digital footprints
└── 时间替代:displaces sleep, exercise, interaction, study

【结尾段】
├── 平衡:neither wholly good nor bad
├── 关键:depends on how it is used
├── 承认:benefits real, risks real
└── 解决:digital literacy and self-regulation

✨ 语言亮点

高分词汇

词汇/短语含义用法示例
ubiquity无处不在this ubiquity brings both opportunities and risks
curated highlight reels精心策划的精彩集锦curated highlight reels of others' lives
engineered to maximise engagement设计来最大化参与度addictive design engineered to maximise engagement
pervasive普遍的cyberbullying has become pervasive
digital footprints数字足迹long-term implications of digital footprints
displaces取代time spent scrolling displaces sleep
digital literacy数字素养developing digital literacy
self-regulation自我调节self-regulation needed to navigate

高分句型


🔄 可迁移表达

原句可迁移到
"integral part of young people's lives"任何描述技术普及的话题
"curated highlight reels"社交比较、形象管理话题
"engineered to maximise engagement"技术伦理、注意力经济话题
"following victims beyond X into Y"网络安全、霸凌话题
"digital literacy and self-regulation"媒体素养、教育话题

💭 思考延伸


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